[ It was, of course, an inevitability that he would be receiving the draft code of conduct for review, but did Magnus have to send it when they were also processing an extremely convoluted murder case?
As much as Longarm would have liked to put it off, he felt he still needed to solidify Magnus' opinion of him. Which meant powering through it as efficiently as possible.
After an appropriate amount of time for someone who was not Ultra Magnus to review the document, the following response will be in Magnus' inbox.]
Ultra Magnus:
I have attached my annotated copy of the code of conduct for your consideration. The document is extremely thorough and I believe fully captures any issues that may arise on the ship. Most of my comments are merely suggestion where elaboration or definition may be beneficial given the multi-universal aspect of our crew. We need to account for different levels of familiarity with such a document.
I also highlighted topics I felt would be particularly valuable to include in the follow-up presentation or for discussion with the rest of the crew, which I am sure you already considered.
If there are any specific items you would wish to discuss, please contact me or we could discuss in person in the security office.
Longarm Prime Deputy Head of Safety and Security
[ Might as well claim the second highest title before someone else showed up. ]
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As much as Longarm would have liked to put it off, he felt he still needed to solidify Magnus' opinion of him. Which meant powering through it as efficiently as possible.
After an appropriate amount of time for someone who was not Ultra Magnus to review the document, the following response will be in Magnus' inbox.]
Ultra Magnus:
I have attached my annotated copy of the code of conduct for your consideration. The document is extremely thorough and I believe fully captures any issues that may arise on the ship. Most of my comments are merely suggestion where elaboration or definition may be beneficial given the multi-universal aspect of our crew. We need to account for different levels of familiarity with such a document.
I also highlighted topics I felt would be particularly valuable to include in the follow-up presentation or for discussion with the rest of the crew, which I am sure you already considered.
If there are any specific items you would wish to discuss, please contact me or we could discuss in person in the security office.
Longarm Prime
Deputy Head of Safety and Security
[ Might as well claim the second highest title before someone else showed up. ]